Wednesday, December 14, 2011

How is my story so far? Critique please!?

Its really interesting so far. I'm guessing this is the first chapter and for that its good. It sort of gives us a little info about who i'm guessing is the main character. So, from how much you have here there isn't much that can go wrong. So, your on the right track, i'm sure the rest will be as good too.

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